Developmental Editing
Big-picture feedback to strengthen your story's structure, pacing, character arcs, romantic tension, and emotional impact.
I help romance authors turn promising manuscripts into captivating stories readers can't put down.
Romantasy•Dark Romance•Cozy Fantasy•Contemporary Romance


David Cole — Romance & Romantasy Editor

Where storytelling meets thoughtful editing.
Hi, I'm David Cole, a fiction editor who reads and edits romance for a living. I know what makes readers screenshot a line and text it to a friend, and what makes them put the book down at chapter 12.
I work with indie and aspiring authors on Romantasy, Dark Romance, Cozy Fantasy, and Contemporary Romance, giving clear developmental feedback on pacing, tension, character chemistry, and tropes, plus line edits that sharpen your voice.
New to being edited? Start with a sample.
Message me anytime.
Thoughtful editing for stories that deserve to be remembered.
Big-picture feedback to strengthen your story's structure, pacing, character arcs, romantic tension, and emotional impact.
Thoughtful sentence-level editing that sharpens your prose, improves flow, and preserves your unique storytelling voice.
Genre-aware feedback on romantic chemistry, emotional stakes, worldbuilding, tropes, and the moments that keep readers turning pages.
An editorial assessment of your manuscript with clear, actionable feedback on its strengths and opportunities for improvement.
Four corners of romance I know intimately.

Where epic fantasy meets unforgettable romance.

Complex characters, intense emotions, and darker romantic journeys.

Heartwarming adventures, charming worlds, and meaningful connections.

Modern love stories filled with chemistry, emotional depth, and relatable characters.
A closer look at the stories I've helped shape.
These are editable sample cards, not real client projects. Replace them with your own work when you're ready.
RomantasyA sample card showing how a full-length fantasy romance project can be presented, from first read to final polish.
Dark RomanceA sample card for a darker romance project, with space to describe tone, stakes and the editorial focus.
Contemporary RomanceA sample card for a modern love story, ready for your own project title, summary and cover image.
A calm, four-step way of working together.
I take the time to understand your story, goals, characters, and creative vision.
I examine pacing, tension, character development, emotional impact, and genre expectations.
I provide thoughtful, constructive feedback and line edits while respecting your unique voice.
I help you identify practical ways to strengthen your manuscript and bring your vision closer to life.
What you can expect from every edit.
I understand the conventions and reader expectations of romance and romantasy.
I pay attention to the emotional moments and storytelling choices that keep readers engaged.
You'll receive constructive feedback that explains what works and where your story could improve.
My goal is to strengthen your writing without taking away what makes your story yours.
Whether you're polishing your first manuscript or preparing your next release, let's talk about how I can help.
New to working with an editor? Ask me about starting with a sample.
Prefer email?blakeco.editorial@gmail.com
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